STUDENT GIVES NEW MEANING TO “WRITE CONCISE”

by Barbara Gastel

In the science journalism classes I teach, I ask students to make their writing concise. I also say that, when appropriate, they can make it witty.

“So, can I do my first assignment in the form of haiku?” asked science journalism graduate student John Scroggs.

I assured him if he could make it work, that would be great.

And make it work he did. Here are the haiku he wrote as part of his first assignment: Identify and discuss 10 helpful points in the first half of A Field Guide for Science Writers. I invite readers to write haiku about helpful points from the second half of the book.

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Barbara Gastel is associate professor of Journalism and of Humanities in Medicine at Texas A&M University.

John M. Scroggs is a student in the Science and Technology Journalism Graduate Program at Texas A&M University.

John Scroggs’ Haiku of helpful points from A Field Guide for Science Writers


Read all the journals
Subscribe to literature
Know you are current

Covering Science for Newspapers by Boyce Rensberger, pg. 10

An ocean of thoughts
Right underneath the surface
Just dive in to see

Covering Science for Newspapers by Boyce Rensberger, pg. 13

Share with cited source
Make sure you understand it
No errors, no shame

Covering Science for Newspapers by Boyce Rensberger, pg. 15

Protect yourself from
Publishers without scruples
Defend copyrights

Writing Science for Magazines by Janice Hopkins Tanne, pg. 22

Do not just use text
Show a picture’s worth of words
Carry more than pens

Broadcast Science Journalism: Reporting News by David Ropeik, pg. 35; Magazine Style, by Ira Flatow, pg. 38

Dry, full of knowledge
Or entertaining and fun
I like the second

Scientists Who Write about Science for the Public by Meredith F. Small, pg. 58

Deadlines, no money
Trying to write to survive
Can I pay the bills?

Freelance Business Issues, by Joel N. Shurkin, pg. 70

Who are the people
That you write about with care?
Make the story live

Telling a Good Tale, by Mary Knudson, pg. 79

Schmooze one source for days
Coax another with full trust
Never betray them

Investigative Science Journalism by Deborah Blum, pg. 88

Streaming volcanoes
And open heart surgeries
Exciting new things

Writing Articles from Science Journals by Patrick Young, pg. 110